All Comments on 'Body Comfort Day Ch. 01'

by MatthewVett

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
damn thats hot

that was super hot matthew made me wet

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Its all in the details

I really enjoyed reading this. The details make the story come alive, actually able to picture the scene in my head.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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Very Erotic especially when she left him with blue-balls. LOL first time I've seen it in a story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
good

But please don't re-use descriptions from your other stories;

sorta spoils it.

Marklynda2Marklynda29 months ago

I like the play of the two different personalities of the girls and how it defines their roles in their relationship. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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