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You are Nerina, my lovely.
I giggled and swept water away from my face. It settled in dark, wet ringlets over a bare shoulder. The cooling lava smoothed out before me and he stepped into view.
You look like Aedan.
He shrugged, an utterly human gesture. Oh, how I adored him.
I am me and you are you. I would know you anywhere, in any shape.
He had known me anywhere, in every shape. Human tears spilled over my cheeks and I welcomed the vestiges of my time among the mortals. Every decade, it faded still more and I worried that I would forget about what had happened.
Then I will remind you. Just like I reminded you of what we were when you still were Nerina.
His arms closed around me and I shuddered. Part of me melted away before I reformed. He lowered his head to drag his scorching tongue up my neck.
Yes. Oh, yes.
I did forget then. I forgot everything but how it felt to be made love to.
It was a good feeling.
- COMMENTS
NymzanSusaurenabout 5 years agoHonestly, the angry elemental handled that whole situation wrong. Makes for a great story, but if he had been smarter and less jealous...he should have simply seduced them both. It was always the three of them...always. The beach they made love on was him. Each element is always found together. I am surprised you didn't give air a conscious form, but regardless...islands cannot be made without earth, fire, AND water. It was always the three of them. I cannot stand jealous jerks throwing a monkey wrench into a love story. He should have loved them both...He could have loved them both. Idiotic force of nature...He needs to grow up...lol
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoLauren Kate has written a supernatural romance series very similar to this. Although I might consider her's largely long winded I enjoyed this very much. It was a beautifully written story with plenty of feeling. Kate's Fallen series slapped me in the face when I read the comments, creative, the brothers etc. but now and all is a different take on a 2009 story.
fanfarealmost 9 years agoMB, a terrifically re-imagineered recital of the mythos of the Titans, the chthonic pre-gods. Entities who existed before there was existence.
No wonder you made so many readers uncomfortable with this brilliant writing style. Congratulations, I am envious of your creativity.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoYou amaze me. I have now read everything you have posted here on lit, and you do not disappoint. Please continue to write!! I work as the managing editor for a small publishing house, and I want to encourage you to seek out a formal publishing relationship, if you have not already. You are too good not to reach as many people as possible.
Cheers!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI liked this one a lot. well written and creative. I do wonder what happens to her two best friends. Does she disappear, are the friends left hanging etc.
PrincessJezebelover 12 years agoI agree with the comments about the story being frustrating, and feeling that she would never regain all the memories, but I believe you did that on purpose so that we readers would really deeply FEEL the way that the frustration and waiting felt to the characters. That made the end blissfully satisfying. Unlike some other commenters, I WILL go back and read this again, so that I can understand it a bit more each time myself, just as Nerina did. Thank you for an intelligent, well-written, and very moving story!
Anonymousover 12 years agoI like your other stories, and there was something about this one that drew me in and made me keep reading, but you definitely drew it out too much in this one. I love the idea, and a lot of the scenes, but going through the memory loss over and over is only good for so long, and after a while it goes beyond frustrating in the way that you want to keep reading to figure it out, and turns into frustrating in the way that you're seriously contemplating not finishing it. I'm glad I did, trust me, but it was just too much.
...And while the scene where it seems like Ajan is going to win is horrifying and very well written, the phrase "his brutal rock penis" just cracked me up.
