All Comments on 'Body Paint'

Good story.

I found this so wonderfully erotic. ~ L

That was great, more please

so erotic and sexy

I love this, it's almost all build-up, just delicious rising tension, you can almost feel the muscles tightening as the need grows too great and temptation swells.

It's good to read something by someone who I'd consider a writer and not just a story-teller, by that I mean someone who knows how to use language to achieve their desired result.

You have a knack for the erotic buildup and holding the tension at a fever pitch. Delicious writing in every respect.