All Comments on 'Body Paint at a Rave Pt. 05'

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WatcherRobWatcherRobover 8 years ago
Too Quick

This story ended all too quickly.

What now?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please more

This is too great please make more of this, as well as your other series

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Just writing for the fun of it. * the Dark Horde series is over. It was started on a whim, and it finally came to a close, though I might re-visit it. It seems that there is a lot of possibilities there, with a lot more adventures. But it was written without a structure, an...

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