All Comments on 'Body Shifters: C.L.A.I.R.E. Ch. 03'

Just to clarify, Body Shifter's Universe is a group of stories by different authors, originally started by JS.

Nice slant on the theme. I fear mankind is doomed :D

While it saddens me that science team scored 0, what the heck, it deserves to get laid :)

It.. was an interesting work. I might look into the others of this series from other people..

But, To be honest, as a fiercly Independent Human, this is pretty much a horror story to me.

But, of course, I like Horror, and grim endings.

Anyway, it was written well, and one of the few reasons I didnt rate 100 Was because more of the general tone of the story.

I am reminded, in several ways, of 'I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream', pain is replaced with pleasure but the ultimate result is still absolute imprisonment...well, at least this one can still express himself...but who knows how long until either his mind or his body gives out

Well, at least there's some hope. If all the offspring are on the one island then that makes eliminating them a singular task...provided you napalm the whole area with no warning, elsewise they'll just alter themselves and mate with fish or birds, or just plain bacteria until they make it back to land and latch on to humans again...

I think its the women who are doomed with all men captured... then the men die from old age and everyone loses... but in the meantime its all party time. :)

Loved it and will look for the other related stories.

wouldn't it make sense that the shifters would capture women with the intention of using them to breed a new generation of humans?

Tiffany cutting the grass on the lawn makes me laugh..!...brilliant story-telling

I enjoyed the previous stories, but this was pretty bad:

1) The scene with the prostitutes was way too rapey. It also didn't help that you made the odd choice to repeatedly describe the main character as "raping" the aliens.

2) Stopping every 5 seconds to whine "OMG, these horny aliens constantly want to give me blow jobs and make me breakfast in bed, you'd never see a HUMAN woman do that" is a total buzzkill.

We already know that the aliens are cartoonish male fantasies - - all you're achieving by constantly whining about real women is reminding us how creepy and sexist this would be if the aliens were real women, which then prevents us from enjoying said fantasy!!

Where are the other Men? More Men = More Shifters = Take over World

I still rated it 5, but this one went a tad off the rails. You did indeed imbue them with tons of intelligence, but what a shame they couldn't have toned down and done things like maybe opened other labs or grown a business. You hinted at these things, but just like his 2-foot dick, the constant idea of rampant sex sped along to overwhelm all else.

Way too long. You could have chopped a third of the story and still made it an enjoyable read.

PLEASE write more of body shifters universe stories.

this is how humanity ends