All Comments on 'Body Swap'

by Woody_the_Cowboy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sequel, Sequel, Sequel!

That was spectacular, you have to continue. Thanks!

RedArrowKuczynskiRedArrowKuczynskialmost 10 years ago
So hot!

Mmmm, that was kinky, I wish I was in Sam's position! Bring on a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
At least post this crap in Sci/Fi

So no one needs to read it. This was terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wow...

I have always wondered what it would feel/be like to have a dick and the way you described it... I came so hard.

BrehatBrehatalmost 10 years ago
Interesting.

This was a very interesting story. You really nailed the confusion felt by both characters. It is very ironic that they do such stupid things such as blowing a teacher, feeling that they are hurting the other whereas they are really hurting themselves. That is they would have if they had remained in the other's body for days or for life. Which is why I think the conclusion was a mistake.

I hope you will write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Five Star

While it's rape, who cares. You did this story great in a way that isn't normal. I'd like to see more honestly :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wonderful story

I think this worked on all levels. It was logical, consistent and well written with a hot concept.

Bliss_DeverauxBliss_Deverauxalmost 10 years ago
Novel Concept

Enjoyed the execution! Great read.

kittycumslutkittycumslutalmost 9 years ago
Hmm

So a little theory my mommy and i been wondering exactly how that is possible wouldnt you need a slight look on how and/or why they switched bodies insert at the beginning or end (mommy said that one) bc me n mommy enjoyed the story but we werent so sure as to the hows and whys and since i was a bad girl im in big big trouble 😉😏 gotta go xoxoxo kitty

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
eh

it turned from his to her pov really fast and then ended too fast

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Masterpiece

10/10 no part 2 :(

FanofanFanofanover 3 years ago

This was so good, i wish there was more

Blackpaw29Blackpaw29over 3 years ago

Original concept and well executed, plus hot as fuck ;)

Sticking with the original pronouns is usually rather odd, but it worked well in this fic.

9/10

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You forgot the last sentance, it should read.

Several weeks went by and guess who was going to the pharmacy to get a pregnancy test kit ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The way to fix the rape blackmail threat is for him (while still in her body) is to send a video email thanking him for helping her live out the rape fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Well, she could have gone out and fucked a bunch of different girls or he could have gone out and had a bunch of guys fuck him.

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