All Comments on 'Bodyguard'

Very different. I like this world you've created, and I always find the juxtaposition of societal roles with emotional and sexual desire. Well done!

Beautiful! Would love to read more chapters.

Very well written. It reminds me of one of my stories set in Medieval times that I have yet to publish. It's titled "Warrior Maiden". <p></p>

Anyway, as an author of erotic romance, I know all too well that it's not easy to capture the deeper emotions of your characters in word, but you've done an excellent job. I've enjoyed your story immensely. <p></p>

Too bad it's under Erotic Couplings, not Romance. :-) You could've written more chapters to it. <p></p>I will be looking forward to enjoying more of your stories.<p></p>

Thank you for your work.<p></p>

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I am a girl and my friend, a guy, showed me this. I wouldn't have looked at this but I was in the right mood. Checking this out this is so hot! Women tend to like the written stuff better than visual so I was surprised he did as well. I wish I was the girl in this story. So forbidden yet no cheating and so much more than sex. This is a story for even the most stand offish women.

- The Canadian Librarian named Katie

and this story was awesomely hot. However the most impressive feat was how you managed to sustain the appriopiate language through the whole story, evoking another time and place in our minds, so that the circumstances seemed believable.

I'm reminded once again why I admire you as a writer - please give us more stories.