All Comments on 'BodyShiftersUniverse: The Audition'

by xxxecil

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bobsamadebobsamadeover 14 years ago
If only....

Top-notch stuff. I love the Body Shifters universe stories and your takes on it are no different.

My personal favourite moment from this one was that little scene with the military vehicle and the soldier.

Just on a bit of personal feedback however, I find the continuous Shifter pleas of 'Please rape me' to be a bit of a turn-off, but I suppose their 'victim' is so far gone by that stage that it's hardly going to bother him!

FantasticJackFantasticJackabout 14 years ago
Good to see...

...you back in the saddle. I've been a fan of yours and of the 'Shifter universe for a while. It's always a treat to read your twisted tales of bra busting hilarity!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
question

Question : since Jacobs "wives" require his DNA to split into two new organisms, isn't his harem full of his own daughters?

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