by joshprim
Bolero was very professionally written. It is a "one handed" article (your other hand may be busy). It reminded me of Ronnie, one of my high school pals from long ago who maintained that Bolero was the ideal fucking music. I wonder what Ravel would have said if he knew that his composition was being used to accompany fucking. I like to think that he had that usage in mind when he composed it.
Exciting writing of an exceptional first time fuck ! Brough back excited memories ! Must have been fun to write and reminded you of your cherry being taken !
I'm a virgin, and have never had a gay experience, but this made me ache to have someone fuck me in the ass. Thanks
I am bi and enjoy the feel of a man's cock in my mouth. I am sorry to say I have never been fucked, but want to sometime. I only wish it could be as beautiful as this story.
i like more details, and more seduction, but this wasn't list that way, and I am glad I read it anyway, hot and exciting, almost made me explode just reading it.
great reading this first time, but you need to expand it to Miles first time taking Connors ass. Develop it into a budding love story, but with a twist, Connor can't be trusted even though he says he can, and Miles finds his soulmate.
Really great story and great descriptions of their feelings during every part.
great job...keep up the writing...
I'd love to read a story about these two flip fucking!