All Comments on 'Bolt Ch. 01'

Same as my title, good start. I'd like to see how this develops....

I look forward to seeing how this story turns out, but you might want to slap it down. The story felt rushed in the hospital.

I enjoyed this, keep it up

First time or not good start. But there is so much he could do make Cheerleaders Not get Off by their Boy Friends. Make them crave him. Same with women at the Mall Young and Old could be a fun trip esp. if he makes them Horny and not get off until he leaves the Mall.