All Comments on 'Bonded and Bred Ch. 13-14'

These characters are so robotic, it's kind of annoying to read. I'm not sure what it is, maybe the way you write, but it doesn't make you relate to the characters. They come off as emotionless & bored, there's no real passion amongst them. I wouldn't think that this was a romance/drama if it wasn't tagget that way.

Are Iris and her sister going to be the next generation evolved in their species?

But I like the characters. The repetition of "little Toby" really annoyed me this chapter though. Can't he just be Toby once in a while?

Well i liked your story so far even if others have not .. dont listen to those.

Keep writing your story :).

I am really enjoying your story. It's nice how the haven't jumped into bed already like other stories. I like how you are taking your time developing the characters and story. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

I commend you for putting your writing out there. But I found this story to be very very very boring and i did not even read this one,and I will not read subsequent chapters of this story. It just has not caught my attention. It is not (my attention,that it) even about the sex. I find your characters t be flat and unlikable,and the plot is tedious (to me). Again,kudos for laying yourself bare-i did not want to e an ass,just explain why (to me) the story drags.

Good story. Progressing at a realistic rate that allows readers to come to know the characters as they would real people.