All Comments on 'Boogeyman'

by TamLin01

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bearsladybearsladyabout 9 years ago

Sex and then shivers....nicely done.

nikkic1983nikkic1983about 9 years ago
why is this on the new list?

Its quite old. I read it several months ago. Disappointing. I liked it, don't get me wrong. But posing an already written and posted story as new sucks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sequel / Alt ending?

I really enjoyed the story. The characters developed nicely, the sex was arousing and the ending was nicely done for the scare factor. But I was a little disappointed by the abrupt ending. It would have been nicer for the story to continue a little longer after the monster was introduced. Maybe it could have proceeded further to the monster having sex with the wife.

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