by TamLin01
Its quite old. I read it several months ago. Disappointing. I liked it, don't get me wrong. But posing an already written and posted story as new sucks.
I really enjoyed the story. The characters developed nicely, the sex was arousing and the ending was nicely done for the scare factor. But I was a little disappointed by the abrupt ending. It would have been nicer for the story to continue a little longer after the monster was introduced. Maybe it could have proceeded further to the monster having sex with the wife.