All Comments on 'Book of Flames Ch. 02'

Excellent chapter but it was not near long enough. If they are all going to be this short I hope you will post often.

I love the development of this story. I am anticipating the rest as it is published

I love how this story is unfolding, adding another character (or more) and adding complexity to the plot. If this was a print book, I would be unable to put it down. It is that compelling for me. Well done.

Now we're getting somewhere !

Make the chapters more than one page.

Just getting into the story and the chapter finished! More quickly please.