All Comments on 'Book of Flames Ch. 03'

longer would be good

I like where you are going with this.

excellent pacing and solid character development. I would love to see longer chapters, but not if it means a drop in quality. Very much looking forward to the next dozen installments.

My imagination really ran wild with this one. Your descriptions are just enough to paint a vivid picture but leave enough room for me to fill out details. I have to say, your style really kicks it for me. Moving on to the next chapter.

A little more content would be the cherry on top.