All Comments on 'Boot Camp Training'

where's the rest of the story? I'm already hard!

I assume this isn't the end? If it is 2 stars. If not...... Good start.

Very short. Though deatils were present, the plot appeared underdevolped. Great start, but abrupt finish. Give it another-longer-try! Best of Luck!

A tad too short but if you can expand on the story a bit I think it will be very good

Hey, thanks for the comments. This is my first time submitting something, sorry it is more of a teaser / test. I have some of the rest and will continue to work on it!

This is a good story as far as it goes,leaving fear & anticipation of what happens next!