by jonthechaosman
Fran got her excitement and found she liked to be a sub. Hubby was able to man up and provide that ownership she needed. No cheating.
Loved all parts and ending. For all those who turn their noses up at stories in this hub that these are not loving wives, Fran is, because she stayed true to her man. True, she was tempted by an unknown power over her, but in the end, her faithfulness was rewarded. For her final slut "coming out" session, if I was the husband, I would instruct her to put on the sheer black blouse with no bra on and her lacy panties and that all, and let her stay like that with her friends in the bar. Again, 5 stars on all!
As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected.
Why is fetish posted in this category?
This one would be BDSM or Fetish. It will save you bitter comments and will giv this type of story it's best chance in the rAtings
Good read this one. Please carry on writing.
It was creative and well written. Great job! Please keep writing.
Authors post, authors choice. My way of look'in at things. Thanks for sharing on Lit. jtcm, great story and writing.
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I found you whole story very exhilarating. I was wet the whole time which doesn't happen too often anymore. If you continue I hope you keep the idea of love for each other and commitment. I hate cheating and deception. What you wrote was fun and everyone won.
Some people just don't know good writing when they read it. Of course, they don't know bad writing either.
This is a very well thought out and written series. I saw the surprise ending from a few chapters early but it didn't matter. Well written and well done.
I would like a sequel where Fran's slutiness is expanded.
Great story, very sexually charged and erotic. I know it might seem far fetched/ improbable to some but when you’re entranced in that sexual fog pretty much anything is possible. Really enjoyed it despite the outcome and links being obvious.