All Comments on 'Bored Fran Ch. 06'

by jonthechaosman

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Ducky7Ducky7about 10 years ago
Very good story from my point of view.

Fran got her excitement and found she liked to be a sub. Hubby was able to man up and provide that ownership she needed. No cheating.

honey_licker1124honey_licker1124about 10 years ago
Great story!

Loved all parts and ending. For all those who turn their noses up at stories in this hub that these are not loving wives, Fran is, because she stayed true to her man. True, she was tempted by an unknown power over her, but in the end, her faithfulness was rewarded. For her final slut "coming out" session, if I was the husband, I would instruct her to put on the sheer black blouse with no bra on and her lacy panties and that all, and let her stay like that with her friends in the bar. Again, 5 stars on all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Fantastic - had the opportunity to score a "1" on everyone of this pathetic authors renderings.

As usual and expected this putrid submission sucks dog-piss as expected.

bobby9909bobby9909about 10 years ago
Once again bdsm is foisted as Loving Wives

Why is fetish posted in this category?

RePhilRePhilabout 10 years ago
Please publish in the correct catagory

This one would be BDSM or Fetish. It will save you bitter comments and will giv this type of story it's best chance in the rAtings

MitchFraellMitchFraellabout 10 years ago
Really good

I enjoyed reading this one. Please carry on writing.

hiDavidhiDavidabout 10 years ago
Good start for what mite be major work.

Good read this one. Please carry on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great job!

It was creative and well written. Great job! Please keep writing.

xtremeddxtremeddabout 10 years ago
Wild and crazy Loving Wives post...

Authors post, authors choice. My way of look'in at things. Thanks for sharing on Lit. jtcm, great story and writing.

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OOAAOOAAabout 10 years ago
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
future

I found you whole story very exhilarating. I was wet the whole time which doesn't happen too often anymore. If you continue I hope you keep the idea of love for each other and commitment. I hate cheating and deception. What you wrote was fun and everyone won.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story

Any further adventure will make fascinating reading,

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bikers as marriage councilors and therapists, sure.

Some people just don't know good writing when they read it. Of course, they don't know bad writing either.

chytownchytownabout 9 years ago
What Ever***

Thanks for the read.

ThomasLordThomasLordalmost 8 years ago
A Good One

This is a very well thought out and written series. I saw the surprise ending from a few chapters early but it didn't matter. Well written and well done.

I would like a sequel where Fran's slutiness is expanded.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 6 years ago
Bummer.

Sad tale.☈

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding

Great story, very sexually charged and erotic. I know it might seem far fetched/ improbable to some but when you’re entranced in that sexual fog pretty much anything is possible. Really enjoyed it despite the outcome and links being obvious.

gentle_touch4ugentle_touch4uabout 3 years ago

Great story. write more like this.

Karn9Karn9over 2 years ago

Great story series. Wonderfully put together, love the ending. 5*

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