by smudgebucket
is it possible Literotica would allow you to be more explicit?What about showing the victims uncontrolably getting off prior to their deaths?
god i want to hear their screaming so much, & more explicit torture, & i want her to enjoy it sooo much... more blood, more splatter, more everything
just lovely
But man.
GodDAMN. She could kill me any day. I hope there's more to this story in the offing.
I love this violent crazy bitch! I want her to enjoy it, I want more explicit torture, maybe she could eat one of her victims, I need more, more!
You pretend to get off on this mayhem, blood and senseless human slaughter, but down deep you love it??? Are you really that sick? One commentor wants more bloody detail - well aren't you a smoothee. Lets hope her cellmate has a chainsaw to protect herself with.
Well written indeed but erotic? sensual?? Just sick torture and slaughter of hapless innocent people without remorse or care! Tormented author?
Perchance you can use your talents in another theme to truly entertain - you think?
whos that dumbass who last commented that he didnt really enjoy it? he should be better off reading his nursery rhyme book. anyway this story was one of the best in this category and what a plot! but as many others said we want more explicit and longer gory scenes!!!