by wingedangel324
Its long but THAT'S ALL you post for chapter 1?! I won't be coming back to read more if they're ALL going to be so short.
Good start but more character description and background is needed. Keep going you have a good start now just elaborate more on characters and descriptions of environment and details in general.
Hope the chapters are much longer and characters are more fleshed out. I also hope that these characters are original and not pale imitations of Sherilyn Kenyon's world based in New Orleans and favoring leather garments.
You've got me and I really want to read more I hope you give us the next chapter and soon. Also In my oppinon it would be better if they were a bit longer. Good luck xxx
Hola guys,
Don't worry they get longer, and as for Kenyon (my favorite author) i took some of her brilliant ideas such as the daimons and the bayou and how he was as a general in greece but everything else is mine. Thank you so much for your input.
-Angel Out <3
This is really good, goofy, sexy and above all else unique!
I really enjoyed it a few things from someone who has lived in New Orleans cafe du monde never closes and the cathedral closes around six in the afternoon also the cathedral doesn't have any gargoyles it has a large jesus statue in the back courtyard that is just as creepy at night.