All Comments on 'Borromean Rings'

This is a beautiful piece of writing, absolutely wonderful. You have written something truly erotic, even if it lacked a smutty appeal. One of the best stories I've read on here in some time.

Could be the perfect beginning of some 9 or 10-Page-Story, but standing alone it's no erotic story...

Now, I'm going to have to read all your other stories.

I agree with anonymous. I see you don't write many serials, but I hope we will have more, many more, stories about these characters.

kids and mel gets her voiceback out of happiness

You dear author, have this ability to write in the fashion I most love to read. Style, wit, dialogue, word-smithing and things of that ilk. The way you bring on a whimsical feeling, being so immersed in your characters, takes my breath away.

When I grow up, I wanna write like you.....

To shake your head is to move it side to side and (unless you are Greek or Bulgarian) is to say no; to nod your head is to move it up and down and (same caveat) is to say yes. With a mute character, you have to watch that: you have Melody shaking her head in contexts that mean "Yes". Confusing!

What a beautiful story. We need more like this on here.

Thank you.

I love ur story. It's interesting to me that u have no physical description of itself. I somehow see u as Asian. But it's a wonderful interconnection.

You write with great sensitivity about the love that can grow between people and how that love can allow them to transcend the boundaries of accepted behaviour and to find a place that allows them to fulfil their love in the fullest way.

O.K. Do you realize how unhappy people are going to be if you stop writing stories? You have a gift for telling a simple story in a most 'un-simple' way. These are some of my favorite stories on Literotica and they don't even contain sex. To be able to tell such stories that contain love, passion, understanding and simple human needs and feelings and yet keep the reader engrossed is amazing.