All Comments on 'Bosom Buddies Ch. 05'

This was another great chapter, too short obviously haha. The story is definitely going in a compelling direction and I like how you mix the great erotic stuff with the characters having problems that seem pretty realistic and interesting. Can't wait for chapter 6!

Dude, your stories are fantastic. Its just, its annoying that every chapter is a longer wait tehn the last.This one was like a, uh, 2 month wait?Whats up with that?

Anyways, awesoem story. love it.

Its hard to get in to with the wait (I reread some older chapters first). And as any veteran reader on this site will tell you, when there starts to be long waits between stories you start preparing for when this awesome story never gets finished. I really hope you can continue this and not leave us hanging, because your writing and your story is amazing.

Awesome story, as always.

Your story bends great sex scenes and teeage drama perfectly. I cannot wait for the next chapter

This is the hottest and most interesting thing I have read in recent months on this site. I have read and rated every part...and you have left me on the edge of my seat. Please don't let us wait too long for the next, hopfully not the last, chapter of this amazing, sexy, and very well written (and edited) story.

Also, I don't know how open to suggestions you are, but as a fan and avid reader I would like to see more Liz interaction with Ian. Just saying.

Excellent can't wait for more

Great sex scenes, believable emotional motivations and reactions. I'm still shipping for Ian and Liz. Keep it up.

Really you just had to leave it hanging at that? way to build suspense thought love the whole series and cant wait for some more but please hurry lol

tri to fin chapter 6 in febuary ok and in the fictional story ( mt sister eva started it all ) in the end of that he got 13 women to fuck . why not he get all 5 women because when steph went out with that guy i was shocked . or because of talia just get 4 girl but it's a good story and hope it comes out faster you dont need to fing me just post your answer ill be watching

That was terrific. If he ended up with anyone I figured it was Elizabeth, but the bond Corrine and Ian have underlines the whole series and this chapter solidifies that. Please finish the story soooooon.

I totally love how you did this, now it's a real story and not just the hot fucks on most of the rest of Literotica. The only criticism I have is that you should have left that last sentence out, or said it in a more open ended way. It kinda destroyed the cliffhanger effect and now I more or less KNOW what's going to happen next. Other than that, "Bosom Buddies" is now my favorite series on Literotica, without a doubt. KEEP WRITING!

This is the first time I've actually found a story that I really like that was believeable and when i get to the end I have to wait for more instalments. I'm used to a whole series being up and waiting.......What i'm trying to say is hurry up with the next installment

I already commented but I had some more thoughts. I agree with a previous commentator, it really would have been more of a cliffhanger if you had not put that last sentence in there, although I guess everyone knew it was going to happen.

Another thought I had is introducing the protagonist to a girl outside the group to shake things up. I mean he has changed a lot since he started hanging out with them it makes sense that he could start going out with someone who is not one of them and it might stretch out the story haha, cuz I don't want it to end.

great story, well written, gz!

Superb!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!

Please continue this story, I would love to read more of it.

Ian grew a spine! :D

Cant wait for the next part!

Obviously I'm late to the party but your writing (and more importantly your story) is really good! If you're not a professional writer already, you should be. I mean, "phantom limb?" It's apparent that you are well read, and your command of the language is superb! Thank you for this delightful story.

well, it's only chapter 5, so that the least i can give

... that Ian has enough gumption to stand up for himself here, instead of just giving in to the raw desire to have Corrine any way he could get her.

Excellent handling of the emotional conflict in the face of the incredible physical HOTNESS that is Corinne! I'm loving your writing style more as the story goes on.

Damn. Now *this* is what I need more of in my porn. Real emotions, that complement rather than compete with the sexy parts. Thank you so much for writing this.

This is the third times I had read through the wonderfully Bosom Buddies saga and this is where, in my opinion, the story start losing it way. Unfortunately Corrie reaction to the changes in the group just doesn't work for me, nor what is coming.

I liked the different chapters

Reminds me of my own high school graduation in 197- , welll it was quite a while ago.

But the sadness I so remember. We had our parents keeping us safe with food and shelter. Our little after school and weekend jobs to give us money for pot and dates. Life was just FUN.

But, with graduation everyone pretty much split up and went away. I still recall calling it the end of the golden era of youth. Now it was moving on to more responsibility, the much harder college courses, as we prepared to make our own way in the world.

To this day, if I had any wish, it would be to relive senior year of high school.

Oh, yeah your story is out of site! Anytime I finish reading and am thoughtful to the point of being melancholy, you REALLY got to me!! Congrats onsuch excellent writing.

Al

Corrine the actual girlfriend???

Good story, but not a fan of how Ian has begun to see the girls as his personal fuck toys, and is getting despondent when they refuse.

I think I’m gonna write an alternative to this chapter, BB. I hope you’re doing great. I still think even after...I think almost 9-10 years since I first read this story, that is the best story on here and probably the only one I’d pay to see. Still looking for it in print. Don’t have an Ebook device and I love print. This honestly if we were in a more...well let’s just say if this was France, this could and should be a TV series or some high quality porno movie series. The only thing that keeps it out of Hollywood is all the sex. Writing wise, character wise, style wise, it’s one of my favorite things to read,

Nice story with lots of drama. Love it.

Well written, although I’m not into teenie bopp sex, but it was entertaining! Thinking about all that fresh young meat.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Except it did? Talk about a hook! What a rollercoaster ride. Another well thought out and written chapter. I definitely look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Good cliff hanger!. Nice gripping story.

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