by writing_guy
It's not bad for what it is, but it is mostly a gay male story and should be there or there should be a disclaimer at the beginning warning those that don't want to read gay stories. I also don't know what a Bother is.
to spell your story title correctly. I didn't bother to read the rest. What illiterate shit we get on Lit nowadays.
We get illiterate shit on Lit because the powers that be allow it for some dumb reason. We also get illiterate shit because that's what is getting cranked out of schools these days.
That is nothing as I started to read and had to up-chuck or I would have choked <<< lol .!* Must be the spelling as I cunt spells eder.! What a crap story and could not read it all.!!!!
... and that word is vomitous.
To the anonymous user who said this person didn't spell it right, he did. Maybe you should check your spelling. Try not to be such a jerk next time. To all this who said this story was "vomitous", it's literotica. It's a website dedicated to literature about sex. This is a type of sex. Why'd you read it to leave a comment if it was so horrible?
This story mage me gag. First of all shouldnt the catigory be gay/male not first time? And second of all it was poorly written! This was a disgusting wast of my time and this story should be taken down
I liked it, good start. I can't wait for more!
Those other posters are just homophobes and can't admit to themselves they liked it, too.
I loved this story, and would also read another part if you added it.. Please !
Innocent brother gets into tight spot, does what he has to in order to avoid the consequences.
Well told, with just a few loose frogs that a light edit could quickly corral.
I, too, would relish a sequel.
Thanks for sharing.
DOUG out
It's not that it was bad exactly, but the wording was awkward and the format of it was a bit dry