by jouet
what an incredable vert exciting story. brilliant to read. can't wait to read more of your fantastic stories. so please do hurry with the next part or parts of this story and others you intend to write
It truly is so easy to become addicted to someone you met online. You portrayed the characters so well. This story is one for the books. I can't wait to read your next one. Please keep them coming.
I enjoyed reading your story, of course you do write well and details only make it seem more real. The idea of the Husbands Shirt and the reasons were simple, yet very connected to the submission. Sounds if not a real event something that surely could develop from one.
While not many stories do I like mutliple chapters, I look forward to yours sooner than later.
Jack