All Comments on 'Bound by the Law'

by bjmichaels

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ICEWIND125ICEWIND125about 12 years ago
IS

THERE MORE TO THIS LIKE DOSE SOMEONE SAVE HIM DOSE THE COP FALL IN LOVE OR WHAT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Interesting

What does happen next?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Holy shit

This was disturbing

moboulionmoboulionabout 12 years ago
Continue Please

Good story so far, I hope it continues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Disgusting!

Firstly your character is disgusting - not even showering after having got cum on him and secondly this story made me just crazy about him being so stupid as well. Just couldn´t read it to the end - it´s not worth it!

If you can´t do better, leave the writing please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Enjoyed your story, please continue adding chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a life lesson people....

If the bartender is shaking his head no-pay attention!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

This is sick. Please tag your story with the word "rape" if you're going to write this shit.

M4realub2M4realub2almost 11 years ago
Hot!!

Great story! Can't wait to read more!

yorksguyyorksguyover 10 years ago
Great reading

It got me so horny reading this. Please continue

RachelSinnzzRachelSinnzzover 9 years ago
wow need more

Talk about a clifhanger need more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
the author of this story is sick in the head

this is rape, plain and simple. it's disgusting that many gays find rape so hot, nay fetishize and celebrate it. i guess russia is right to limit the effects of the gay propaganda on impressionable young minds

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Meh

I mean, it's a pretty good story, and all. Tbch I love this sorta thing. The thing is, though, you have too many exclamation marks, and you capitalize in the wrong places.

Fix those, and I'll give you five stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Absolutely awesome story my friend. Would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is the best story I have read in my life. I look forward to the rest if not others of this kind

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot

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