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All Comments on 'Bound for Budget-Busting'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Play that is play. A good time had by all and no damage done. A wanting good read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
You need an editor

Badly done.

SimplySilverSimplySilveralmost 7 years ago
Not too bad...

A reasonable read but it needs some work on hooking in the reader with the erotic details. Emotions, sights, and sound descriptions are helpful here.

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