by DocAutomata
That was an awesome story, with so many possibilities to go forward on so many different levels ... just awesome
The collar even mind controls random people in the area too? That's a little bit much. Even so, you've got a good thing going here. Keep at it!
Am I a bad person if I suddenly want to see him turning her into a bimbo sex slave up to anything, including street-walking prostitution and hardcore porn films?
I wish I had someone to collar me and make me the woman I wish to be. This is how I want to be, to live, to loved, & to be loved.
Absolutely Fun story@ would Love To Magically Change My Woman and My self Into What Was Body Size We Wanted and Our Thinking To Match! Heck Of An Idea!
Need to find that shop!! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I love the premise and cheer for the consent being a constant topic in this. Congratulations!