All Comments on 'Bound Friends Pt. 17'

And cut this drivel down to about 3 or 4 decent chapters and you might have something. As it sits you're just droning on and on and on and on........

So, the next morning Lea will accomplish her heroic task of freeing Sophia. Or not? You got me in your storytelling claws so tight that I fear something might come up and keep her from achieving her goal and at the same time I am afraid that this would result in the story to end. All stories must come to an end, but I don't want this one to finish, not by a long way. It is so awesome and you are so apt in inventing devious devices that can torture our four friends. Pretty please ...

And yet you're still reading...

I agree though, *some* sentence structures do break the flow of the scene somewhat. Not a biggie though.

Only disappointment is I ran out of chapters to read. Looking forward to the next Jess.