All Comments on 'Bound in Spirals Ch. 03'

Thank you for another great chapter and I look forward to reading more.

i like the way your building the story. your trying to start an original story, that's impressive. out of curiosity, on estimation how many chapters are we looking at.

My rough estimate at the moment is around 10-15 chapters, but I'm not sure exactly how fast what I have planned will develop. I already have some rough ideas for a sequel as well. I plan on this being a fairly long story with a grand, adventure filled world. At the moment I'm just having such a great time writing that I don't know when it'll stop. When I first started writing this it was just a practice for writing flowing action scenes, but now it's turning into a huge world. I have so many notes and ideas that I don't know which route I want the story to take. So, in summary, I have no idea. haha

Fantastic short stories are good and all but its the long ones that are the best, examples being the missing dragon and the lost lord sagas. With the route that your going with this i think it'll be up their. These stories are an expression of yourself so keep writing for yourself and to a degree for others. Take positive and negative criticism were its appropriate and f**k the rest that cant just enjoy the story. Hoping for faster releases, cause I'm enjoying the story a lot but that's just me being eager. Good Luck

Yeah, I tend to enjoy the good long series' as well, and to be able to compare to them would be amazing. As I go on I'm feeling more and more love for the few characters I've introduced, and I see my own thoughts and emotions being mirrored in some of their actions. And, I wish I could write faster, unfortunately I seem to only get between 300-800 words done per day. God, even just thinking about it gets me excited to write more haha. Anyways, makes me feel good to hear you're enjoying the story. :)

I am really enjoying the story so far I can't wait for the next part.

really good read. I recommend posting it on other sites other than just literotica. You may have to cut out the sexual stuff when you get to that for those versions but otherwise this is simply a really good read that i hope you continue. Thanks a lot.

Letta is a tsundere. Just putting it out there.

It started out kind of choppy and disjointed... but it's coming together as you get a better feel for the characters and the world... so far im enjoying it... as a reader and not as a reviewer...

-jaye-

Love reading your evolving story!

Thank you

Thank you this story is marvelous. Its so good i forgot to comment or rate the previous chapters,

5 stars for all !!