Bound in Spirals Ch. 03

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Finally, he felt himself drifting off. Those, now becoming familiar, patterns coaxed him from his wakefulness and into deep sleep.

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And thus ends Chapter 3. I hope you've enjoyed reading it so far! Any constructive criticism is welcome. Compliments or suggestions are also greatly appreciated. If you have any questions, related to the story or not, I'm happy to answer.

~ DS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you this story is marvelous. Its so good i forgot to comment or rate the previous chapters,

5 stars for all !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great tale!

Love reading your evolving story!

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

It started out kind of choppy and disjointed... but it's coming together as you get a better feel for the characters and the world... so far im enjoying it... as a reader and not as a reviewer...

-jaye-

goatman92goatman92over 8 years ago
Tsundere!

Letta is a tsundere. Just putting it out there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
AWESOME!

really good read. I recommend posting it on other sites other than just literotica. You may have to cut out the sexual stuff when you get to that for those versions but otherwise this is simply a really good read that i hope you continue. Thanks a lot.

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