All Comments on 'Bound in Spirals Ch. 14'

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prsstaridprsstaridover 8 years ago
Great Chapter

It's been a while since this story has had as entertaining chapter as this.

I had contemplated to no longer follow this series after the last couple of chapters. The madness thread you were follow was growing tiresome to me. In stead of rooting for Sam, I was wanting to have someone give him a mercy killing.

Please have him to start pulling it together soon and be what he is meant to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
not good man

I really liked your story at the start now though don't you think you have been dragging the madness thing for far too long . Tell u wat your story has wonderful plot

Don't waste it on this madness part move on my friend

It's been what 14 chapters and still we don't have a fucking clue abt

Any part of your story like who is Hanged man in the first place and

Wat do you mean by Samson being agod and wat not I have a thousand questions about your story so I humbly request you to get into the fuckin story already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wolf9696wolf9696over 8 years ago
UFFFFF

Enough of the frickin madness crap..... just have the mad ass wipe of a hero killed already and give a better role to the sword captain.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sorry but have to agree on the madness

don't see the point of this line, either make him go nuke or heal, it's turning into cruelty (meaning NOT nice to read).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Your Story

I like the story as well.. But I have to agree with the others. It does seem to be dragging... At some point there has to be some progression to get pass the "madness"...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

A good story that seems to be getting very mudled, about time the maddnes went so we could get on with the story.

JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 8 years ago
Great story!

I found this story the other day and started binge reading it and now I will have to wait for the next chapter. :-(

The madness and self deprecation is making me want to slap Sam though. I guess you have done a good job with character development when the reader actually gets mad at a character though! lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
"If you can't handle the madness, get out of my head."

"If you can't handle the madness, get out of my head." I still trust the storyteller to resolve the madness satisfactorily. To do so too quickly would be unacceptable, such is the nature of madness. To not do so at all would really flame my ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Frustrating

Having perused your watapad it is requiring me to sign in to continue to read. I suspect that there will be several people frustrated by such a requirement. I and several others like what you have written, but putting it behind a wall requiring a sign in...is ...difficult.

DistortedSenseDistortedSenseabout 8 years agoAuthor
Response

In regards to the anon asking about wattpad, I did not realize it required a sign in. I don't think it used to do that. That's somewhat frustrating to hear. Also, I have an email mailing list for those who didn't want to deal with making a new profile, but I may consider adding another alternative approach. Perhaps a public google drive folder. Still working on editing, but I'll try to figure it out by the time I'm done. Thanks for the information.

–DS

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Why u retards hating.plus love the story bruh fuck haters

Wtf bruh why are all of u hating him and saying it sucks just cause he is sometimes insane hmm Everybody becomes insane when after battle is ended or the war is ended okay bruh so shut up this story is great u guys should go and suck a dick now and don't tell the writer to remove Sam being insane hmm and let him be a bit skilled in magic he has only had magic for like a week now and how the fuck can he be good when he had magic only for a while if u were there hmm u would probably be the same but a bit shit in using it than Sam.I know this is a story but still it should be accurate if it was not and he did what u retards said u would complaint like "omg this sucks it's makes no sense it is worse than my small dick omg I mah go and wank know "bye mutha fuckas fuck u hater drink bleach bitch nowpiss of stop reading this comment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Flow

If you keep on jumping around with the plot you will loose readers. And for I do not like going back and forth between chapters to gain a understanding of the plot line.

NovemberComingFireNovemberComingFire10 months ago

There are only a couple chapters remaining so I’m gonna stop here. I’ve had enough of this character. He’s not interesting anymore, he’s annoying. And given that it’s close to the end, that’s not gonna change in by way that makes a bit of sense. It started so promising.

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