by jakladd
An absolutely first-rate story. Well-paced and thoughtful, with plenty of excitement. Well written, believable action and plenty of it. I found myself identifying with the lead character time and time again as he explored his emotions within the story. Keep up the good work!
Good to have a decent bisexual story for once. Yeah a little long but hey great job. Please keep writing more like this but shorter.
I was so happy to see a longer story, I have such a hard time waiting for chapters to come out in a story! This is one I'll be reading to my sexy bi husband! Thanks!
great story! I leaked soo much precum......... what a relief to finally cum
Wow, this was sooo hot, I know it's a story but man...would this be a dream sex life for me. I edged during the whole story, so well written. I would love to read this story out loud to my wife while jerking off for her, but, she just isn't adventurous like Katie in the story and would be disgusted by the fact that I even read it, let alone having had it turn me on so much. All the descriptions, the gay lust, the passionate sex with Katie was so good. I certainly identified with your main character even though I have very little "bi" experience, it's not from the lack of desire to explore it. If my wife wasn't only a room away when reading this, I would have stripped off all my clothes and would have let my cum fly up my chest after the long edging. I'm sure I would have cum so much that the room would have smelled of nothing but cum, instead, I was content to edge and stopping numerous times to enjoy my own leaking dick juice as I thoroughly enjoyed this masterpiece! If there was more than a 5 rating you would have earned it!