All Comments on 'Bound to Happen'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fantastic!

I've been on this site for a while, and I can honestly say this is one of my favorite stories I've read. Absolutely fantastic. <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A little chatty

The dialogue is too light and chatty for the intensity these two are supposedly feeling. The "uncle's" scruples are touching but too easily overcome. Of course. The "niece" is very young to be so kinky. That level usually doesn't happen for years. They might be curious but I expect most 20 year old women would be properly terrified to actually get tied up.

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It might look like I came late to writing, but in fact I have been scribbling (and typing!) for a long time now. I've just been reluctant to post any. I began posting my non-sexual stories on my blog site,and this led to me taking the plunge and revealing the darker side of my...

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