by EroticKeys
Because I was enjoying it, until you mentioned a third person, depends where this is going, I will wait to read the next chapter to find out if I will give it a 5* or 1*, I am afraid Group Sex is my 'hard limit'.
the scene with him and julie seemed a little manipulitve. she is a shy girl trying to come out of with him,but he doesnt mention stacy or the d/s relationship which might not be something she would like til she is "nudged" into it thru stacy .
Still enjoying the story, but like the others, unsettled at where this will go. You write Doogin as a nice, caring man but it seems it would be easy for him to become a 'collector.' Like those people who hord a hundred cats, he is on a path to a harem of wounded young ladies. You've said Nancy has a place and purpose. Still hoping to see that because I still find her creepy. ;)
I would sure like to see the next chapter(s): it's been a few months since this one was posted. Will there be any more?