All Comments on 'Boundless Love Ch. 01'

I look forward to reading more -- and I love you nom de plume! Well done -- four stars.

I've done a bit of writing myself, gotten published and enjoyed some degree of success with it. So I have a little experience behind me as I comment on the works of others. I'll often not comment on work that seems particularly unprofessional in its composition, but after reading this, I just have to send you my positive feedback. In my opinion, this piece is perfect and gets a triple score of high praise for romance, eroticism and kink. You have crafted your characters with skill and fleshed them out nicely within the constraints of so short a story. Plus, you do well at turning a phrase and holding a reader's interest. Bravo! I hope to see more bondage based erotica from you. If this site features more authors at your level of competence, perhaps I should sign up and become a member here.

-Squirming with delightful arousal,

Julanni