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Click hereTheir bodies were slick with sweat and the room reeked of her feminine musk. Roland was on the edge and Granna's pleasure was building again, her movements losing their rhythm. Roland reached up between them and took two big handfuls of her breasts before pinching both of her nipples hard. It was like igniting gunpowder. She screamed as she came. Her sex milking him with contractions as Roland's movements became frantic. He grabbed a fist ful of her hair and pulled her down to his mouth for a searing kiss as he bucked himself out of her and shot his seed between their bodies. .
Granna collapsed on top of him and Roland gently rolled her over and spooned up behind her. He wrapped her in his arms as they both fell into an exhausted sleep.
i like this chapter it was a bit short but i think it was well-written! hope we see more chapters!
I enjoyed the story, but I would have preferred it non-warcraft. Also some grammar issues as others have said, but no big deal. Thumbs up.
Regardless of what direction you take it, I'm eager to see more.
You need to put some work in the way you are writing. There are parts that do confuse as another person said. Like when you went from ''himself'' to ''myself'' it makes things hard to follow. But other than that you have a good idea and start for this story.