All Comments on 'Boyfriend's Treat Ch. 03'

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope. Also, unlike many, or most actually, on Lit you take your time and show patience with introducing the sexual situations until you have created the appropriate mood and situation, that’s beautiful.

I’ve published a couple of pieces on Lit and would really appreciate you reading them and giving me the benefit of your experience, if that isn’t too much of a liberty, I hope not as I don’t want to appear to be rude. More importantly, though, is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

I agree with all London James has written, have read all your submissions and greatly enjoyed them.

Thank you so much, will be watching for your neat