All Comments on 'Boyhood Dream Fulfilled'

you should definitely do a followup with what happens between johnny and anne. it would be cool.

What a truely beautiful story-you create just the right atmosphere. Thanks!

You developed a nice atmosphere, I liked the verbal interplay between the 3 characters but I needed more foreplay, if you will, more time to get to know and to care for the characters before they got down and dirty.

The sex part of the story was fine, again a bit rushed. Join my voice to the chorus asking for a sequel involving Johnny and Anne. And take your time with the next one; there's no need to put them straight into the sack.

A story that was both erotic and warm. One of the best favors a guy could want. Well written.

An excellent short story. I hope to find another where he fucks Anne.

and with any luck he got to fuck Anne too.....a nice little tale...

and a good time was had by all

You should definitely be writing screenplays.

Long narrative is a more complex puzzle, but it's still about

a character who wants something...and what he/she does to get it.

You could begin with a spec script or two of an existing TV series.

(They won't sell, but they can get you an assignment.)

There's a helpful book, still around, I think.

"How To Sell Your Screenplay" by Carl Sautter.

This deserves at least one more chapter, if not 3 or 4. Am disappointed JoeDreamer doesn't seem to be writing (or at least posting here) anymore :-(

At least 1-2-3 or maybe 4 more chapters, or better yet, a whole new story about Anne and Johnny.

Hope Johnny and Dawn get together more often.

Why did this end? Or maybe I should say where is the ending?

END?

Liked it. A lot. 5 stars!

Bill S.

excellent. let to my imagination as to how it works out with Anne.

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Funny, Kawaii, und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

What? Thats it?

Would love a sequel.

Good story but what happened with Anne?