All Comments on 'Boy's Night Out'

Nice to have something a bit different

good Story GOo writing

A story with a build-up...I liked how it was done. Quite believable and quite hot.

It's a "drawer", not a "draw". Look in a dictionary!

The story was well written but leave out the part of the bubble bath and what she does when she is alone by herself but get to what the neighbor and her do together on there boys night out.

I will give you a 500 for the feeling you put into editing and corrections.

from a writer of steamy erotica to another, i have to give kudos! i enjoyed it very much! keep writing!

lol at it's a drawer comment, all that erotica and the best you can come up with is it's a drawer not a draw "get a life" anyhow, well constructed story, look forward to there follow up.

Nice job. I enjoyed the story and thought it flowed nicely. Definitely left me wanting more.

Don't pay attention the people who criticize over misspelled words or what you should leave out. You're the writer and no one is perfect, we all make mistakes, but you know the story and what it needs. Keep up the good work.

Just another boring cheating slutwife story.

Good story. How about some more of it??

Thank you for it.

Ignore the idiots. They trash every lesbian story they read. Have to wonder, if they hate lesbians so much, why do they read them. I very much enjoyed this tale. Please keep writing. Would love a sequel.

This is one of the best lesbian stories I have ever read,some of course will not like it thats there problem certainly not yours.I particularly liked the tribadic descption.Heterosexual Male

A story inspired by a porno that uses a lesbian porn scene that inspires two fictional women to have lesbian sex. Interesting. A couple of more paragraphs describing the sex would have been nice but overall good.