by 09cutter
It was a good story. I loved the way you took it from a young mans POV. It is rare that you see it that way. I am glad it turned out the way it did. A 4 star story. Keep writing!!
Not as hot as the first 3 chapters but a good finish to the tale. Glad it ended good with no one finding out about the relationship between Mark & his dad-in-law. HEA.
Discovering that you desire sucking cock when you are married is a difficult thing to handle.
The writer does a good job describing the addiction of cock sucking, especially with a well hung young man that can't get his fill of your mouth or ass.
It is a life changing experience.
Great story! Super hot! I was hard the whole time. Nearly came when he said he wished he could make him pregnant, and started calling him little girl! So hot! Thank you for your work!