All Comments on 'Brad & 'Tanaya Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Chapter

Yeah, finally another chapter. It was wonderful of course. I'm so glad we got to see Ren. I hope Brad goes to visit so they can renew their friendship. And I'm glad Tanaya got to talk to Brent and Matty. I hope she and Janey do get along better...and I can't wait to see what her secret is regarding kids. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter. I just can't get enough of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Yeah!

Still rootin for Ren!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great - still waiting for Ren and Janey

Thanks for this new great chapter, I was waiting for it. I hope Brad and Tanaya will find a way to make their relationship work. And I really hope that Ren gets out early and that he and Janey will have another chance (she needs to get rid of the cop, he is not good enough for her.

Can't wait for the next chapter and hope that you will publish it soon.

sacrificedangelsacrificedangelabout 15 years ago
Excellent!

... This chapter has really gotten into the backbone of the awkwardness of Ren>Janey><Nicky><Brad>Tanaya. You have managed to squeeze soooo much into a small amount of writing too, excellent detail that can be elaborated on later to deepen it.

Looking forward to more, as always.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Thanks for the new chapter

Loved it as always.

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