All Comments on 'Brad's Family Matters Ch. 01'
by KinkyGuy420
- 17 Comments
Anonymousover 19 years agoScat and bisexual stuff, blech...
If this had been a story with just the mother, son and daughter, that would have been nice.
Anonymousover 19 years agoSome 13 year old's idea of sexuality......pure garbage
Anonymousover 19 years agoA busty mother who willingly fucks her son: nice beginning.
A son who likes to eat his mother's shit: disgusting dirt.
A son who likes to suck cock in front of his mother: not much better.
A mother who supports his son to fuck his sister: nice, but can't save the rest from being shit.
You call yourself "kinky", but the story is simply awful. Reduce it to a story of hot sex between mother, son and daughter, probably even with wanted pregnancy, and you might get much better rates!
BUICK GSover 19 years agoYOU STARTED OFF GOOD THEN YOU WENT OUT TO LUNCH SO TO SPEAK WITH THAT SCAT MESS. YOU SHOULD WARN YOUR READERS THAT SCAT IS A PART OF THE STORY AND PEOPLE WILL AVOID YOUR STORIES. AS THOSE WHO ARE INTO THAT WILL READ. AS FOR THE BI-SEXUAL PARTS OF THIS STORY, WHILE NOT AS BAD AS THE SCAT IT DOESN'T FIT INTO THE STORY EITHER. A MOTHER WANTING TO HAVE SEX WITH HER SON IS NOT LIKELY TO WANT TO SHARE THE SAME DAY SHE STARTS THE AFFAIR. AND YOU RUSHED THE SISTER INTO IT SHE WASN'T NEEDED AT THIS TIME IN YOUR STORY. MORE DETAILS ARE NEEDED IN YOUR SEX PLOTS AS YOU LACK DETAILS. SO YOU NEED TO THINK OF WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO WRITE, AND WRITE TO THAT PARTICULAR GROUP NOT ALL OF US AT ONCE. I LOOK FOWARD TO YOU NEXT ATTEMPT.
Anonymousover 19 years agonaughty naughty pornographic imagination. Well executed. Ignore the flames.
tittyguyover 19 years agocant wait to read the chapters with the messy part... keep on posting
Anonymousover 19 years agoYour story is great! Would like to read about mother-daughter-scat-play...Post on!
Anonymousover 18 years agonice scat story.those not interested in scat plz just leave and stop flaming
Anonymousabout 18 years agolovely
this story is sextastic
glad to see some one helping out with the scat-incest deficet
Anonymousover 17 years agoWe loved the story .. it has so many possibilities of where it can go next .. please don't stop
Donna & Meghan
Bfreetorunalmost 10 years agoHowever, thank you for writing and I am sure there are those that will enjoy it. More power to them, to each his own.
Anonymousover 5 years agoSo turned on by the honesty with which they talk about their dirtiest desires. Can't wait to see the shit play.
