All Comments on 'Brad's Road Trip Ch. 04'

by SpotInTheSand

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cutedaddy69cutedaddy699 days ago

I, on the other hand, thought your remark about Republicans and common sense was the funniest part of this chapter..

I don't care too much for eating out women that have fresh, or worse, not so fresh, semen of other men dripping out, but hey, that might be just me...

The angle with the myterious phone-friend is a good one though.

Old_LionOld_Lion13 days ago

Sweet!!

My first threesome was two nurses. They weren't really bi, but they were really sweet an tried hard to get into it. Some kissing, fondling as I performed for both. Damn! Oh to be young again.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Why ruin a decent story by putting your politics into it? Added absolutely nothing to the story except to show the ever tolerant leftist view of people who think differently than you do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You're so skilled at creating these lovable and incredibly hot characters!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
personal taste

Enjoyed some of the story, but the condoms and porn cumshots ruined my fantasy immersion. its a fantasy, not a trojan ad.

magpieolasmagpieolasover 8 years ago
I love love LOVE it!

I love the story building! The sex is hot too. Lol ty!!!!!!

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlover 11 years ago
Can't stop reading.

Really loving this story. I keep sneaking glances of it and reading a few more lines whenever i can steal a moment, even at the most inappropriate times. ;-P

On to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
FAWK ME!!

i am in a permanent state of arousal since starting this!! just damn fuckhot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
How do I get into one of these tents?

I've never thought of myself as particularly "adventurous" when it comes to sex but Spot's writing makes me want to do some experimenting. I am sooo hot right now! No doubt I'll be bookmarking this as a favorite!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fantastic!!

It seems as if he has acutally had some of these experiences personally.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 16 years ago
Damn good.

Terrific writing and dialog. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it!

it just keeps getting better with each chapter!

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May 9, 2024 -- The Scavenger Hunt is in full swing now, published through Chapter 5! Chapter 6 will be a few days still, due to my editor having, ya know, a life or something, but I would expect by the end of next week, and then 7 will be along a couple weeks later. It's a b...

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