All Comments on 'Brain Storm'

Loved it, will there be a continuation to this story, I'll keep a look out for it!!!!

Another brilliant story that asks a moral question about private thoughts.

Oh that could be a tricky situation, your girlfriend and mother in the same room and you being able to hear their thoughts. I love your dream sequences Smokey and this one is brilliant. Your use of time stamps are an effective way of letting the reader know what is going on. I was relieved when Hannah woke up and found it was just a dream as she and Mara seem perfect for each other.

A bully / tormentor from your youth can have a dramatic impact to your adult life, and I'm glad Hannah was able to forgive Amber in the end.

The moral of this story is be careful of what you wish for, you might just regret it.

In answer to your question at the end, yes please I'd love more from Mara and Hannah.

Thank you Smokey another wonderful story from you, one of my favourites of yours.

Jc

Wait so was it a dream or not, we need answers lol

2xsafreak—

It was definitely a dream. 😊💙