All Comments on 'Brambleton Ch. 06: Bye Ravensworth'

by sr71plt

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
nthusiasticnthusiasticover 8 years ago
Finally!

A writer who knows the correct phrase is 'free rein', referring to riding a horse with a loose vs. tight rein, allowing freedom of movement. Too many people here use 'reign', which means to rule, totally different meaning. However since the writing in this series has been consistently excellent, it's not surprising but merely refreshing. Can't wait to find out what's next for our hero.

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
do hope there is more

This has been a very good series and I do hope you will continue with it. Please know this story is close to home and I love it that much more. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What is Matt thinking???

Man, the Fitzhughs are down right garbage for their operation, but my main critique is that Matt seems to be fine throwing his education away by knowingly skipping class and not seeming to even care to go back once Christmas is over. He became fine with casually being some whore

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well, Doh.

Yes, I think I've gotten at the half-way point of this series that the theme is the struggle to get Matt's head turned in the right direction. It's fun to see how far off the track he gets before going back to college and then home. It's fine with me if he has some fun along the ride - especially with black studs, which seem to be a specialty of this author - I'm happy to say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I don't understand?!?!

What a complete dick! What about what Dashad had to do to get money so that un-grateful so and so could go back to uni? I know we don't know what it was but it had to be something big cause it's not as if Dashad had it lying around doing nothing.

DORTMAN69DORTMAN697 months ago

MOI MÉME 38 ANS MARÎÉ DEPUIS 17 ANS MAÎS BY ! JE TRAVAILLE DANS UN ŸHPÀD DEPUIS 11 ANS ET ME SUIS LÎÉ AVEC CERTAINS D'ENTRE EUX AVEC QUÎ JAI FINI PAR LEUR TAILLÉ DES PÎPES A FOND C'EST MA PASSION DEPUÎS ADOS TÉTEŔ AVALER ! ET AYANT ETAÎS INITÎE PAR UN VIEL HOMMO J'AI PRIS GOUT AUX VÎEUX MESSIEURS !!!! JADORE AUSSI BOUFFER DES CULS ET COMME TOUT CE QUI SORT DU GIGLEUR A PISS ET BÉNI POUR J'AVALE AUTANT LE PÎPÎ QUE LE LAÎT DE VÎELLES COUÎLLES CE QUÎ FAIT LE BONHEUR DE PAPYS ÎMPUISSANT ET LE MÎEN JE SUÎS HYPER BUCCALE !!!! ET JE SUIS PAS PRET D'ARRÊTER DE LES RENDRE HEUREUX ! SUFFÎT D'ÉTRE SYMPATHIQUE MALINS ET DISCRET !!!! VIVE LA BÎTES 😋💋😋

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
usersr71plt@sr71plt
3028 Followers
Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...