All Comments on 'Brand New Whores'

by Softly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Cool

There has to be more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
This is realy HOT

This is one of the BEST I have read in a LONG, LONG time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good story

This is a good story that could be true!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Needs more chapters

This story is great. It really crys for more chapters. I think just the surface has been touched here

noone269noone269almost 20 years ago
I liked it

I have been meaning to read this story for quite some time, well done and keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Need another season or another group of athletes.

Need another training camp season or another group of men for the wives and daughters and mothers to do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
O Softly!!

Loved this HOT story,girl..You do have a feeling for a desparate situation!!! Thanks,good work.

belvoriangarathbelvoriangarathabout 12 years ago
others loved this story

I don't understand the negative comments if you don't like the story genre. Others loved it, and favorited. Just don't read it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice

Personally I truly believe this needs a sequel or many more chapters lol

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
A thousand different tales

There are a TON of interesting stories for this season alone! I especially liked the Angel transition. Realism? Fuck a lot of realism! This is funny (at times.).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

love a cheating wife!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs Work

Kind of boring. The descriptions of sex have no detail, nor do most of the descriptions of the participants.

Also, the premise is fairly ludicrous. The team already pays them enough. Let them buy their own whores, if they need them (which they wouldn't, since pro athletes have no issues getting laid).

ErotFanErotFanover 5 years ago
Great story

Original and humorous. There should be a follow-up story about life after the Giants.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 3 years ago
What A Hoot!

I loved the physical description of Glenda as the stereotypical Italian woman. I liked the statement Fred makes to Dolores about how sex went from daily to almost nothing, and that now maybe things would change. After their first interaction with the team I'll bet they up their fees for next season. 5 stars.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

White whores and Jamals. Every hack author has an ir cuck story.

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