All Comments on 'Brandi and Kelly Ch. 10'

It is amazing how consistently excellent the author has been in writing exciting new chapters. I thought this story had run its course long ago, but continues to be erotically exciting!

bring up the next part soon. Hope we can read something new of Kelly's adventures too. ;-)

A Master protects his submissive and certainly his slave! So this poor girl trusted and was abandoned??? I know it's just fiction, but this is absolutely beyond comprehension to me and irresponsible writing.

The young guy was trusted with a beautiful, submissive woman and he lost her! He will not be trusted again, I assure you. Someone else will have to be found to look after her. Next chapter will be available in a couple of weeks - end of May

Boring... No one gets punished or gains revenge. Brandi is the only one abused, and she zones out in her own little world the whole time. Why write a meaningless story about a bitch stroking her ego.

I worked in a hardware story and a woman came in asked me how she could attach some thing to a exercise ball. She didn't tell me what it was, I thought about calling one of my friends to help. She said no and we looked at plastic bolts that might slide in the fill tube, she said thanks then told me to get lost.

That's it but its a true story. We did see her at the register.

Taking too long for the climax. Almost like you are too full of yourself. Could have eliminated chapters 9 & 10.3F98