All Comments on 'Brave Hard Ch. 02'

You should have elaborated further on the skirmish and made it a little deeper. But hey you said this is based on reality and you are retelling the events. So I will SHADDAP about it! Also I like how you kept it REAL with on how the NYPD handles things regarding race. "Arrest the black guy!" LMBBAOH! This story is good and you have shown that people connect in more ways than they would ever admit. If he treats you right, loves you with all his heart, also sticks with you through thick and thin then why not? Go on girl! Write more upbeat stories like this even if they are figments of your imagination.