All Comments on 'Break Time'

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Breann2004Breann2004over 14 years ago
Good story

Good story. I love to read other peoples work. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Breann

LunafallsLunafallsabout 10 years ago
Nice Twist

An exciting story, and I loved the twist at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice scene, just needs a story wrapped around it.

I struggled quite a bit trying to construct a mental image of: "She spread her hips far apart,...", and never was able to accomplish the task.

Anonymous
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