by Blue Dolphin
This story is fucked! She was a MILF and obviously hot. Being an MILF she had been preggie once and obviously was seeking some more action, possibly because her hubby wouldn't or couldn't give "it" to her? She did not wear any panties and she was willing to fuck in the restroom. Perhaps she did not care if she got preggie again? The BJ did not matter, she was being fucked in her cunt until you said you were about ready to cum. Being she was a MILF, why would you have any care or need to tell her you were about ready to shoot your wad...instead, just have shot it in to her womb without telling her.
it had the raw erotic energy that i love but i think the stories are better and more enthralling when there is more seduction, dirty sex, and something more than a quick fuck feel. its a story so you have to give it a bit of umph cause in RL we have genuine flesh to play with... make your stories competitive like you have in many of your others.