by LillyRae
Jon Stewart never really turned my crank before I read this, but I am going to think filthy thoughts about him every time I see the show now.
And the mechanics: Good editing! Good grammar! Good pacing! Good!
Smart, good writers are sexy. Thanks for sharing!
Every consider writing a sequel? Since the he just retired maybe you could use that as he left the job to go find Rachael again to...
Excellent choice of subject matter! Great writing, too!