All Comments on 'Breakfast with Daddy'

cant wait for the rest of the story :)

Impossible to finish - stammering dad act got old after the 3rd paragraph.

way to long go ahead and take it to the final finish, he needs to take her in every way there is, make her his own slut

While I would agree that the stammering and stuttering got a little tiresome after awhile, the story itself was hot as hell. It REALLY drew out the anticipation that much more, which made it both sweet and frustrating. Please submit the next installment as soon as it's ready- I'll definitely take the time to read it! Oh! And, one more thing: take a few more passes on the editing side as there were a handful of typos sprinkled throughout- nothing outrageous, but it'd be amazing to have the spelling/grammar stay on par with the terrific writing!

I've been waiting for a sequel to this story for a long while. Glad to see you've finally delivered. The ending was hot! I know that it has the potential to be scorching. Please don't keep us in suspense much longer.

Thank you from miss silver766.

A very good story, well told, a little too much stammering and stuttering, and a little to long in the 1st phase of seduction, and should have been ended with the completion of the seduction, the actual mating of the father /daughter. Both were to too aroused to wait all day before actually mating.

Turn off the stutter button, it makes for an impossible read.

that was amazing!!! hurry up and do the next part!!!

let's not forget about - PHEEENOMMMENNNALLLLLLLLLL........

i've didn't actually read entire story.. i've only skimmed over bits\pieces

here\there....................... the fact the father actually somehow put that

much resistance directly into the daughter's absolute seduction made story

million,billions,trillions,killions times better... i've don't think that i've ever

gone over any stories like this............ PHEEENOMMMENNNALLLLLLLLLLL

cannot wait for the next chapter!!

Please write the follow up, I loved the slow build up, keep it going

I am loving this story. So Hot! And, caring at the same time. I'd like to see it play out!

A TOTAL WASTE OF TIME .

Is it going to continue? I hope

OMG what an anti climax when i realised I've just read the final chapter and that i have to wait for the next instalment!! Please hurry up and get it out....

PLEASE MAKE THE SECOND PART TO THIS. I LOVE THIS STORY VERY MUCH AND CANT STOP READING IT!!! Please make the second part!

Much love 💕💕

come onnnnnnn where's the rest dammit.

Lol, I think it was more infuriating than anything, hehehe. :)